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Miserable Victory
By GirlintheBox
The day long-awaited finally arrives
sweet taste of freedom
of victory
Fulfillment of all needs, what I was once deprived
A way out of this trap
of misery
just one more step to go before seeing the light
blinding light of freedom
of victory
sweaty palms before ascending into paradise
now able to shun this world
of wretched misery
a world of white intensifies, i cannot see
this too bright freedom
this victory
the terror once more grips my heart and mind
i crawl into my hole
of misery
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Copyright 2004 GirlintheBox
Published on Monday, August 9, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
sweaty palms before ascending into paradise
now able to shun this world
of wretched misery - Sick write bud
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On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580)
wrote:
Trapped in a cage with an open door...good piece! Great flow. Ciao, T/S
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On Monday, August 9, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
This write is awesome. You put my poetry in your shadow. :) ~Whisper~
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