Whoreable

By Swooping Synod

drown bitch drown
in a pool of black blood
spare me the effort of exploiting
you to death
just die
now

you whoreable waste
of breath breathing lies
just lies there as i cut out your tounge
and wiggle it in
front of your face

it's too late to aborting you
erase yourself
from my memory banks
give it up to me
before choices
hari-kari

how does it feel
me fucking you as you die
or can you even feel anything
you heartless
self centered
cheap ass trick

was it as good for you as it was for me?

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Published on Monday, August 9, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Whoreable"

On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, Sin (1135) wrote:

wow....very morbid and twisted
On Thursday, September 2, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

Done, and done befor ... One sided rape and murder poetry may have a place ... But in your hands? No; you see to write this and get my agreement that it got a place as poetry at all, you would have to do two things.
On Thursday, September 2, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

Be perfectly clear on why you would write it(a rare case where the poet actualy matters). And have something new to say about this subject. There are many reasons for me saying that.
On Thursday, September 2, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

The most importent is that there are many rape victims on this site(one of your reasons could be that, just as example, or you trying to understand the man you portray).
On Thursday, September 2, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

The other major reason is that with no moral in this, you would look like a person that realy got some growing up to do(in my eyes).... "ooohh wow thats sick!" Yea that kind of person ...
On Thursday, September 2, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

Story telling is fine sure, and you do it well. But, with no futher info on this. You so far look like a man that see his first pair of tits. To me that is. Maybe you can explain your purpose. -Nadir-
On Sunday, August 22, 2004, glasshouse (530) wrote:

wow. this is scary. and creepy. and makes me wonder. HOWEVER... it was quite well written. anyone who can work in "hari-kari" has my respect. -Glass
On Sunday, August 22, 2004, glasshouse (530) wrote:

cant help reading it over and over
On Sunday, August 22, 2004, glasshouse (530) wrote:

does that make me bad? -Glass
On Monday, August 9, 2004, Storm (143) wrote:

Ok...this scared me, I like it! Sick and enjoyable. Thumbs up.
On Monday, August 9, 2004, AHHH (184) wrote:

that is a sweet write- michelle
On Monday, August 9, 2004, manywalks (747) wrote:

Do I sense just a tad bit of anger here?
On Monday, August 9, 2004, knightmirror (426) wrote:

dude you are one twisted fuck!!!lmmfao as sick as this is.the title caught me but i jumped into something along the lines of an acidic pool.i gotta keep my eye on you.****-knight
On Monday, August 9, 2004, glasshouse (530) wrote:

Wow. Someone feels rather strongly, I'd say. You definitely... ummm... captured something here. It was creepy. And messed up... but it was vivid to say the least. Impressive on that level. -Glass