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Bloody Razor
By Mischevious Princess
From it drips my blood...
Tiny red dots splatter
all over...
It forms a puddle
of crimson red with a gray
backdrop...
In bursts my mom
her face turns pale as
she spots the puddle...
"What happened?"
she asks me....
I just sit there shaking,
Bloody razor in hand
and cry...
tears of blood.
A couple days later...
I'm released from the hospital.
My bloody razor clean and dry...
A few hours more....
It'll be bloody again!
Something made me stop
And think....
Then I stopped
And dropped my bloody razor...
I may have dropped
my razor...
But you haven't .
And that's what worries me!
I wish I knew....
how to help you
drop your razor.....
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Copyright 2004 Amber Young
Comments on "Bloody Razor"
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A former member wrote:
has anyone showed this to BR? i bet he would dig it
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On Sunday, February 5, 2006, Mischevious Princess
(28)
wrote:
No, I do not believe BR has seen this work.
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
i think there is more that goes into cutting that one can figure... but it was described very well..."a few hours i will be bloody again"... good job!
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
hey broken, you might want to fix those typos ;) Though it is fun trying to figure out what word its suppose to be. :P I'm glad your razor isn't bloody anymore. Cutters make me sad :( :::OLd
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