The Doll (her sin)
By WinterGrave
out the window this soul could see,the distant sky, the paromount trees.
a sadness develouped from the passion within
the aching of her body
the lust as sharp as a pin
a longing
a temperd feeling
a notion under pressure
a desire that can not be tressured
her fantasys
her exspereinces with him
are not but dreams
and are sure sins
she feels as a doll
numb but can see it all
motionless she sits
and dreams he will come
these feelings she has
has taken there toll
a need for salvation
as her lust takes hold
as the season grows older
her needs grow deeper
her fantasys more sinful
self-plessure less pleasureful
and the want of his venom
the thought that she cant
was taking its toll
as the passion withen
never seeced to flow
farevers a long time
to seek a shared moment of happyness
but all is lost
as her soul falls
condemed to not hell nie heaven
so bent fast and forlorn
dignity is past
she sits on her shelf
a porceline figure
the doll whos passion cost
the darkest desire
her wicked mind could fathom
was the torment she felt
as she lay motinless
starying away....waitng for him, her sin.
Comments on "The Doll (her sin)"
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On Sunday, May 1, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Love the second-to-last stanza. Great write. lots of emotion and creativity here. I love it. ~*~Tart~*~
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
great writing.. keep it up!
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On Friday, July 23, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
bestial torment of the self inflicted kind .. purgatory ... lurid limbo ..lol ... tonally ominous , and totally overpowering .. great friggin' write man ... funguy