Pride Taken Away

By Crimson_Angel

I'm stuck hollow
and alone.
I used to be happy
Now im fighting just to
belong.
Nothing seems real anymore.
I feel held down.
But i chose you, i chose my
own path.
I just want something
real.
You put me in this cell.
Your very own living hell.
Just for me.
I want my old life back.
Not be who im told
to be.
The worst part of me is you.
It wasnt meant to be like this.
i dont wanna be part of this anymore.
But i dont know
whats worth fighting for.
Every battle im the one laying there,
as you scream at me.
Its about time you get some of you own medicine.
I wanna see you abused and crying on the floor
as i scream at you.
I want you to know what the pain feels like
when your life and pride
is taken away!

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Copyright 2004 Crimson_Angel
Published on Monday, July 12, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kfritz On Thursday, July 15, 2004, Kfritz (12)By person wrote:

    i know exactly what youre writing about, wonderful job

  • A former member wrote: a well defined peice here Crimson, nice write.

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