Misplaced in You

By Syn

And Im
diving
guiding myself
steeper
deeper
into you
into
your darkness
evergrowing
need
needing you
feeding off you
bleeding
for you
trying
crying
justifying myself
to you
basking
masking
trashing myself
for you
clouded
mind
fit
unkind
undue time
losing
moving
farther away from you
dying
flying
screaming
mistreating
defeating
you

*I had a better write than this, and when I went to publish it, DP lost it...this is what I could remember*

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Wednesday, June 30, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Want expressed at its highest level, great write.

  • A former member wrote: this is breath-taking. and all the heartache! oh! the heartbreak! i loved it

  • murder_in_clubland On Wednesday, June 30, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    wow,this is beautiful just like you...amazing...such raw emotion~ss

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