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When you wake up alone
By Syn
When you wake up next to me
And I am no longer here
Just remember each moment we shared
And go one without me, face the day without fear
For I will always be with you
My heart and my mind will remain
It's just the body that is empty
It's just my physical sense that has changed
But I can never leave your side
Keep your focus and your pride
You really CAN go on without me
Just think of my happiness, I am now free
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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Friday, June 25, 2004.
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384)
wrote:
I like this..i like the last line too i think it connects the poem together~ss
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A former member wrote:
This reminds me of a song but I cant think of it at the moment because its 6:00AM too Tired to think .ds
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On Friday, June 25, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
haha thanks you two, I really appreciate it, though I do have to agree, something is just wrong with that last line, just haven't had the time to edit yet :) Thanks again, Syn
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On Friday, June 25, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
I really like this one too... no matter what the rhythm seems like. I like it
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A former member wrote:
I really like this but the rhythm doesnt seem right on the end of the last line, but apart from that it is brilliant - AtomVamp
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