Defeated By You...

By Midnight Shadow

I run away,
Looking back over my shoulder.
Running away from my past,
So dark and haunting.
Then, I stop.

You reach out to steady me
As I look up into your eyes.
I apologize for running into you,
But suddenly your arms are enfolding me.

Then the shock wave hits,
Every horror of my life.
My knees buckle under the constant abuse,
Yet you keep me adrift.

I grow cold as my past tries to break me,
But the wall around me is strong and prevails.
Then...
My past is defeated.

The wall slowly starts to crumble,
My only protection gone,
And I fear what is on the other side.
All I see is you.

Your mysterious green eyes gazing at me.
I find myself lost in them,
And feel your arms still around me.
The sweep away all chill from before,
Warming the very depths of my soul.

For the first time,
I feel something strange inside.
Two words can describe this feeling,
Happiness...
And the other is completely foreign to me,
Love...

I smile this time as I look into your eyes.
Your lips capture mine in a kiss...
I awaken remembering,
The moment I fell in love...

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Copyright 2004 Midnight Shadow
Published on Wednesday, June 16, 2004.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • DarkWolf On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    Another beautiful write.. I love the last two lines the most.. very beautiful.. -Michael

  • SilencedAngel On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, SilencedAngel (52)By person wrote:

    This is just wonderful...I love it!

  • Lord Kalgalath On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    Very nice....i like this a lot

  • Savannah On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    gave me chills... very cool

  • Shadow Fox On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, Shadow Fox (20)By person wrote:

    As always, you did good.

  • aXe FactoR On Monday, June 21, 2004, aXe FactoR (335)By person wrote:

    oh man...this is very sweet, esp the last stanza..i liked it a lot, amazing. -MeL-

  • girlafraid On Friday, June 18, 2004, girlafraid (480)By person wrote:

    this is so beautiful...i'm glad you have found this feeling...wonderful work

  • Midnight Shadow On Friday, June 18, 2004, Midnight Shadow (67)By person wrote:

    I haven't...lol, I'm still looking for it. I have no idea where this poem came from. That scares me, lol. ~Tracy

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Thursday, June 17, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    You have a way with emotions that is just...its breath taking to say the least, as usual a very much enjoyed read ^_^ Thank you

  • nell On Thursday, June 17, 2004, nell (271)By person wrote:

    how can one help falling in love with someone who would stand there and break down our walls brick by brick, wicked piece;)

  • Storm On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    This scares me. My only thought in the end was "But when he leaves he has ton down all your shields and left you naked, vonerable.." Love, if it is true has enough power to defeat almost everything... even the past. Beyond my fear: this was beautiful. Lov

  • Midnight Shadow On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Midnight Shadow (67)By person wrote:

    Ah...yes, so true. But the question is...did he leave or is he still by my side? lol...one of the many mysteries I love my poetry to contain. Unfortunately, this is a poem of pure fiction on my part. So it is beauty with no reality...~Tracy

  • Malice In Wonderland On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    This is beautiful not dumb!silly ms kya Scholar

  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    wow. love is a very powerful emotion. A_C

  • A former member wrote: great job you express every emotion there is to

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