Things I Suffer
By Lucia
There Are Things,
That Cannot Be Told,
Feelings, Emotions, That Are Too Bold.
Many Of These Things, Lie Within,
Waiting... With Patience... For Their Life To Begin.
I Have Thoughts, That Noone Has Had Before,
I've Had Feelings, Come To Life Through The Door,
Of My Heart, That Beaten And Torn,
And From My Head, Tortured, Filled With Rage, And Scorn.
The Things I Know, Noone Else May Ever See,
The Things I've Felt, Noone Has Felt...Except... Maybe...
The One Possibility,
Is A Gurl I Know, Who Healed My World,
And Fused Our Hearts, 1 From 2.
She Might Know, How Deep It Goes,
When Lonliness Comes, And Takes Its Toll.
We Were Together, Then Ripped Apart,
That Is How These Feelings Started,
Of Lonliness, Despair... But Still Knowing,
Believing, That She's Still There,
And For Her, My Love, The Only One For Whom I Care.
/ Lucia /
Comments on "Things I Suffer"
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On Thursday, July 1, 2004, Lexicon
(40) wrote:
Tragically Beautiful
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On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, SilencedAngel
(52) wrote:
I couldn't help but read this one over and over again...it pulls you in and never lets you go....
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A former member wrote:
Such a rhythmic flow...the rhyme is also excellent, which is hard to find these days.
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On Sunday, June 13, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
Rhymings skills! Beutiful story, and sad as often here on DP. Beautiful.
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On Saturday, June 12, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
this is a great display of your feelings,of which many of us share, excellently written, the second to last verse being my fave here