When Evil Kitties Attack
By SilencedAngel
Passions building to great heights
Hungering for sweet touches
Desiring for your hot mouth upon my skin
Needing to feel you near me
Needing to feel you in me
Unable to catch my breath
My heart beginning to race so fast
I feel my back arch upwards
As you torment my skin
With feather light touches
With soft kisses that barely touch my skin
I feel as if flames are dancing across my body
Enticing me to climb higher
Along the steps of pleasure
I feel a force building throughout my body
The flames burn bright in my heart
The hunger devours my soul
I begin to moan and whimper
As you run your nails over my skin
Ever so lightly
Ever so gently
Causing such enjoyment
Causing such torment
You continue with your teasing kisses
Everywhere you touch
Makes me burn brighter
Now I know that the flames will never die
As long as you are around
And how I want you to be around
I yearn for you
I long for you
I need you
Just don't stop what you are doing
Please don't stop
Don't stop
I need more
More
I need all of you
I need you to complete me
I will do whatever you want me to
All you need to do is ask
And it shall be done
No matter what you desire from me
Ask me
And it shall be done
Comments on "When Evil Kitties Attack"
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On Sunday, October 17, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue
(42) wrote:
Brings back old memories...depressing as they are to me now...Gorgeous...
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A former member wrote:
eville kitties -laughs- good write
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On Saturday, May 1, 2004, a restless wanderer
(14) wrote:
oh, to touch like that again, to feel it in return - I love your style, you have the ability to make the words seem real, to inspire old memories to live again
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On Friday, April 30, 2004, Necromancer
(71) wrote:
It is inspirational to me. It has such a deep description of feelings and love. it makes me think of my girlfriend as i read it. well worth being added to my favs. ~Justin
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A former member wrote:
Wow... This reminded me of how I feel about a certain someone whenever he touches me... Stunning work, you captured that feeling perfectly to me. Gave me a lovely warm fuzzy feeling deep inside my heart where I thought it was hollow. ~Wish Upon A Star
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A former member wrote:
Really, I can't get over how much I love this poem! I wanted to write something just like this for him, but I couldn't find the words. And now I feel like you said them all for me here. There's nothing that isn't perfect about it!
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On Monday, April 19, 2004, SilencedAngel
(52) wrote:
Thank you so much for your commentary. It was inspired by me and a friend goofing off online so I decided that I would post it. Though I didn't think that anyone would comment on it. Thank you again!!