~He, Who I Cannot Have~ Continued...
By Savannah
continued...
I walked a blazing desert, barefoot
In scorching summer heat
And all I have to show for it
Are scarred and blistered feet
Tonight I'll sleep on beds of fire
But in Heaven I once stood
And waited for you patiently
Til no longer I could
Angels locked the door to heaven
With my soul forever banned
Now I'm standing here with Satan
Because I waited on this man
So as the darkness falls upon you
And you're wishing I was there
As my heart is growing stronger
Let me make your's more aware
I would have loved you endlessly
I would have held your hand until-
The world had stopped its spinning
And everything stood still
I would have given you most everything
But, I didn't have enough
So I'm still standing here with Satan
And still I want your love...
Comments on "~He, Who I Cannot Have~ Continued..."
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A former member wrote:
*nodding
I'm not going to say I know how you feel.... because I don't, but this speaks to me. I am waiting on someone to realize he wants to be with me... to be enough... or at least I wish he would.
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On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, Black_Cherry_Doll_
(69) wrote:
Again you leave me speechless---steph
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On Tuesday, September 28, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
You have great talent indeed. I love the style you write in. This aches all the way through.. such a loss.. such pain.. -Michael
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On Tuesday, June 8, 2004, Mistress Shadow
(249) wrote:
Great rhyme pattern. I think I followed this, but I guess I better go read the first to make sure. ~T~