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Velvet Dreams
By Guttercat
In this velvet infinite,
I see the dreams that are not yet born,
Not yet gone.
They burn with a subliminal intensity,
An intensity that’d soon burn out.
But they are here for now,
This moment,
This chance,
This opportunity.
An exultation or a sigh,
Let them not pass me by…
In sleep or whilst awake.
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Copyright 2004 Guttercat
Published on Tuesday, April 27, 2004.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Velvet Dreams"
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On Thursday, August 23, 2007, carlosjackal
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wrote:
Fantastical and brilliant. This is a real gem and I'm surprised this hasn't received more comments. -Carl
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On Friday, May 28, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
You have a beautiful way of weaving words together...
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
...'velvet infinate'..hmmm...as bast said its a lovely visual.Beautiful poem..Butterfly..xxx...
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On Thursday, May 13, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
whahaha.. *dances* damn.. err ennyways I totaly agree with purr...
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On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
the beautiful ephemeral moments... gorgeous fragment-of-time/and-beyond piece. Lovely write.
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On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
I think I know the moment you're writing of...it can be right before actual sleep, but also as you awaken. 'velvet infinite' sums it up beautifully...
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On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
Your words also wax philosophical and I had to come back and say that I'm still thinking about them...I love a poem that does this.
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On Tuesday, April 27, 2004, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
"velvet infinate"... mm. nice visual.
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