Cold sheets

By Moodswing

Fate

Ha! You speak that word as if...
as if my heart would flutter,
my will would simply break

Crumble neatly at your feet,
heart skipping several beats

I'd rather chew on rusted razor blades!!

Love

You, the cultured expert of seduction...
of broken promises beyond bounds,
expert lips and satin touches

Gladly will I draw delight
writhing wildly through the night

Don't fool yourself, I moan because it turns ME on.

Tired

That's right, I said tired...
Your time for redemption has passed
Don't whine, it is so annoying

You had your chance to claim your prize
You really thought I bought your lies?

I'll call you the next time my sheets are cold...

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Copyright 2004 Moodswing
Published on Saturday, April 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • MESUN On Sunday, September 2, 2007, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    whoa, nice! turning the tables.

  • Dayer On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    awesome write, great job :)

  • OLd SouL On Sunday, April 18, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    I love cold sheets.

  • SilentStalker On Saturday, April 17, 2004, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...lovely...'I moan because it turns ME on'...I was on the floor when I read that one...that's hilarious when you think of the face you'd get from a phrase like that...the jaw would be locked at full capacity for a while...lol Scholar

  • SilentStalker On Saturday, April 17, 2004, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...I really don't see too many men thinking of themselves in the same way if someone gave them this...so nicely done...I love this... -Darun Scholar

  • Neith On Saturday, April 17, 2004, Neith (21)By person wrote:

    haha great write! i love it...nice picture by the way :) ~shy vampire

  • Moodswing On Monday, April 19, 2004, Moodswing (63)By person wrote:

    thank you for both compliments

  • manywalks On Saturday, April 17, 2004, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Ah, but thats what they make electric blankets for. ~ mw

  • SilentStalker On Saturday, April 17, 2004, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...yeah, and BOB, I guess, eh...? Scholar

  • manywalks On Saturday, April 17, 2004, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Yep.

  • gracefullytorn On Saturday, April 17, 2004, gracefullytorn (61)By person wrote:

    nothing keep going i was just commending you for it

  • gracefullytorn On Saturday, April 17, 2004, gracefullytorn (61)By person wrote:

    wow you dont hide anything do you

  • Moodswing On Saturday, April 17, 2004, Moodswing (63)By person wrote:

    whats to hide??? lol

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