Just Words

By Anaelle

Sick, Wasted
Devoid of You
Lost everything
that made Me
Whole
Loved You
Love You still
Sinking of My
Heart
Can't - Won't
Resurface
Becase You
Push Me
down
Love the
Pain
Hate the
Love
Cling to what
makes Me
Drown
Washed tears
shed for
You
Won't you
have
Mercy
Angel of My
Soul

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Published on Tuesday, June 26, 2001.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: beautiful well penned thoughts, thank you sharing your art, I enjoyed reading it.

  • A former member wrote: I have to disagree, the "angel of my soul" thing takes the sad, angry tone and makes it feel like more of a longing, wistful tone. Great job, regardless.

  • A former member wrote: I like the whole poem up until it says angel because there is all this anger, fustration, and sadness, but yet this person is your angel? I would never consider a person who would do such a thing to someone an angel. Very lovely poem.

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