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The Leap You Took To Big
By Cwn Annwn
I left my security on that star in the sky
I have a secret...
Of me not being I
You clipped my wings-
Your the bastard who wont let me fly
I need you to understand-
The ice is melting...
Along with the sun of desert sand
The feelings I haven't felt
The leap I took to big
How I'm about to fall and not about to land
~GoNe~
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Copyright 2004 xFallen Immortalx
Published on Monday, January 26, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Leap You Took To Big"
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On Thursday, December 6, 2007, Circe Avalon
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wrote:
Very good work, stucture is unquie.
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Very short, but very descriptive. "You clipped my wings, YOu're the bastard that won't let me fly" I'm sure we've all had this feeling. I love it- The write, not the feeling ~*~Tart~*~
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On Thursday, January 29, 2004, -Oz-
(134) wrote:
"How I'm about to fall and not about to land"....wow i feel like that practically 24/7....it's no fun....wonderus write...~oZ~
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A former member wrote:
"You clipped my wings- Your the bastard who wont let me fly" Wow... Supressed rage kinda thing... LOVE! ~Wish Upon A Star
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A former member wrote:
Sounds like you made a decision you were'nt ready to take... but there is hope! You write awesome poetry so you have that!
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