i hate him

By Tangent Ponderings

he hits you
i hate him
you tell me
you love him

you tap him
he slapped you
i wanted to deck him
you stoped me
you told me to back off

he hurt you
i held you
and told you
not to go back

he smokes and he bitches
he lets bum off him
you smoke and you won't stop
i hate that you love him

i heard him
talking
saying bad things
about you

he pushed me
i decked him
it started
a big fight

the cops came
they took him
and left
me to stay

you hate me
i fucked up
we can't even talk
inside i think i messed up

he got out
you saw him
and ran to
his side

you love him
i hate him
he cares none
about you

then one day
he left you
you said
it was my fault

i held you
while you cried
i said
it would all be ok

i hate him
i loved you
but now its time
i must go...

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Copyright 2004 Bob the Mailman
Published on Wednesday, January 21, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Anoblechicken On Thursday, March 30, 2006, Anoblechicken (38)By person wrote:

    very sad this is a story that i've been threw, happy chickens!!!

  • Drifter On Wednesday, January 21, 2004, Drifter (265)By person wrote:

    This flows really well. Nice work

  • Tangent Ponderings On Wednesday, January 21, 2004, Tangent Ponderings (13)By person wrote:

    I wrote this as simply as i could because it is as simple as it looks. This really happened my ex fell in love with a guy who is a lot older. He told her he loved her, but treated her like shit. At least I am glad that she no longer likes him and has move

  • Tangent Ponderings On Wednesday, January 21, 2004, Tangent Ponderings (13)By person wrote:

    moved on. ~Bob~

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