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i hate him
By Tangent Ponderings
he hits you
i hate him
you tell me
you love him
you tap him
he slapped you
i wanted to deck him
you stoped me
you told me to back off
he hurt you
i held you
and told you
not to go back
he smokes and he bitches
he lets bum off him
you smoke and you won't stop
i hate that you love him
i heard him
talking
saying bad things
about you
he pushed me
i decked him
it started
a big fight
the cops came
they took him
and left
me to stay
you hate me
i fucked up
we can't even talk
inside i think i messed up
he got out
you saw him
and ran to
his side
you love him
i hate him
he cares none
about you
then one day
he left you
you said
it was my fault
i held you
while you cried
i said
it would all be ok
i hate him
i loved you
but now its time
i must go...
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Copyright 2004 Bob the Mailman
Published on Wednesday, January 21, 2004.
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On Thursday, March 30, 2006, Anoblechicken
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wrote:
very sad this is a story that i've been threw, happy chickens!!!
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On Wednesday, January 21, 2004, Drifter
(268) wrote:
This flows really well. Nice work
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On Wednesday, January 21, 2004, Tangent Ponderings
(13) wrote:
I wrote this as simply as i could because it is as simple as it looks. This really happened my ex fell in love with a guy who is a lot older. He told her he loved her, but treated her like shit. At least I am glad that she no longer likes him and has move
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On Wednesday, January 21, 2004, Tangent Ponderings
(13) wrote:
moved on. ~Bob~
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