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Final Fuck
By Loserland
All in my head
Images of you
You and him
Fucking like wilderbeasts
Covering secret lies
With naked sweat
Smothering the scent
Of honest devotion
Haunting torment
What we had
Cremated to ashes
One night
Changes the course
Of all nights to come
The scenes
Play over and over
Thoughts won’t leave it alone
Put on your clothes
And walk away
I can’t stand the sight
Of such a beautiful hideous thing
That was our final fuck
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Copyright 2003 Loser Johnson
Published on Saturday, October 18, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Final Fuck"
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A former member wrote:
SO GOOD ! One of my favorites. Ive been there .... and that almost felt good to read. A release of sorts. Thanks :-p
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On Saturday, October 25, 2003, Cinn
(152)
wrote:
never been though it (surprised aren't ya?) but i really love it anyways
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On Monday, October 20, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
wow...i agree with velvet...great write
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On Sunday, October 19, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
how many times have i told a lover this...only for them to return because the sex was just too damned awesome..lol
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On Sunday, October 19, 2003, Delilah
(113) wrote:
Been here...felt this...and it sucks...good write though, you put it into words...I'm not too good at that...~Delilah~
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On Sunday, October 19, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
wonderfully dark. i felt this deeper becuz i have gone through something like this. great write ~Drea~
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On Sunday, October 19, 2003, ghost
(13) wrote:
hey bro, dark very dark, i've had a simular expirence, i like it! i too am a rocker, vocal,drums,lead guitar......ghost
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