TearfulNightmare

By eternal despair

i dreamt the worse dream ever dreamt tonight
i dreamt you left me.
i held you tight but you slipt away.
the bullet shot and your blood became my tears.
the thought has brang me to cry like a baby.
i cant imagine if this dream was real.
this baby wont lose her daddy.
i dreamt of the one thing i couldnt bare to see.
but there it was,
i dreamt the worst dream in the history of dreams.
i dreamt my daddy was shot in my arms.
the picture will never leave my mind.
daddy i wish i could hold you right now,
and know your still with me.
my tears are running like rivers tonight.
the thought of losing you is destroying me.
i held you tight but when the bullet shot,
you slipt away from your baby girl forever.
please daddy never leave me, i love you.
i dreamt the worst dream ever,
i dreamt my hero died in my arms.

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Published on Sunday, October 12, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "TearfulNightmare"

On Monday, January 5, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467) wrote:

offer hugs...it will be ok
A former member wrote: How sad... But try to see the positive prespecive: a least it wasn't true... Very nice job lady:) *Lilith*
On Sunday, October 12, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156) wrote:

Sad... But A Tale Of Caution Born On The Backs Of Those Who Do Not Head The Caution - Live For Today And Never Take For Granted, For Want Of Nothing. Curious. GPhD.
A former member wrote: Very sad, indeed. My grandmother died a few days ago, and all I have done is think about her and dream about her since then. *hugs*
On Sunday, October 12, 2003, eternal despair (66) wrote:

that sad to hear. *hugs back*
On Sunday, October 12, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

Wonderful write.. sadness in the mihnds of many.. I dreamt that my father hang himself in a tree I planted with him when I was a kid.. This made me sad... Monkey
On Sunday, October 12, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...tragic it is...but gladly a dream...I understand the crying; anyone would have woken up in tears after dreaming that their most loved one died right there...
On Sunday, October 12, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...I'm so used to death and destruction that sometimes I forget about the people that aren't...then I read poems like this that remind me...
On Sunday, October 12, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

*hugs* ...and I do believe all who read this should do the same... -Darun
On Sunday, October 12, 2003, eternal despair (66) wrote:

please be kind with this one, it was a VERY realistic dream and im really upset. lame as it may sound i cried for a long time, cuz it felt so real. †Chérie†