in unison

By Vesica Piscis

sanctuary calling it's slow progression

days biting nails
drawing breath

forgiveness
a long cascading flow
that always feels too thin

bring me out
amongst a deviantly planned ruin
let me mend with my peers

let this sludge see us reaching

as we bend to her will

in unison

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Copyright 2020 Vesica Piscis
Published on Sunday, April 12, 2020.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • tonebone On Wednesday, May 13, 2020, tonebone (51)By person wrote:

    An attempt to slough the vestiges of plague?..."a deviantly planned ruine" you might be on to something.

  • dwells On Tuesday, April 14, 2020, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    Welcome back old friend and I see your skills have changed; remarkedly so. I especially enjoyed the subtle female protagonist at the root of it all. Or so it seems to me. Cheers! - Dan

  • Vesica Piscis On Tuesday, April 14, 2020, Vesica Piscis (3)By person wrote:

    Thank you Dan. I hope you are doing well.

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