SPEAK
By Anunnaki
You sound more swearing each time that we speak,
It used to be just words before, now everything is so bleak.
I really want to be all that you need me to be and more,
I just can't.. right now.
The first time that we kissed we both couldnt speak,
Probably had something to do with the state of our lips.
Sometimes I feel you reach out to me stretching that hope once more,
It just always fades so quick.
You know I get sad when we dont speak,
When I think of how our bond grew and broke to bits.
Its those tears that help me to gather strength and courage,
To fight some how.
When am close to you I can .... I just can't speak,
When the opportunity presents itself am dead inside and just so weak.
I wish you would let me bring you in and show you what you mean to me,
You just so f--king out of reach.
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Comments on "SPEAK"
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On Monday, August 6, 2018, I IS ME
(380) wrote:
We came, we read, we felt. we also enjoyed. Please continue
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A former member wrote:
This makes me remember something that my grandmother told me when I was a teenager "think before you speak, because once you say something, it's out there and there's no taking it back". In a lot of cases, words hurt more than a punch, and can do a lot more damage. I appreciate this in all it's sincerity. Great job, darlin'. Rebs:).
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On Wednesday, January 10, 2018, Anunnaki
(18) wrote:
Thanx a lot guys, am glad you liked it!
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On Wednesday, January 10, 2018, Just Dave
(448) wrote:
Great write. The first stanza really stood out to me. Words hurt. I don't say hurtful words but I swear a lot and at my age it is very unattractive. Enjoyable read. JD
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On Wednesday, January 10, 2018, Anunnaki
(18) wrote:
KKkk you should probably stop
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A former member wrote:
This is heartbreaking and feels so real to things I have seen. Thank you.
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On Wednesday, January 10, 2018, Anunnaki
(18) wrote:
I like that you relate to it cause its kinda a history lesson for me
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On Wednesday, January 10, 2018, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
I really liked this.... however, the line "You sound more swearing" doesn't make sense to me.
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On Wednesday, January 10, 2018, Anunnaki
(18) wrote:
It was more a feeling than an actual sentence i just went with it.
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On Wednesday, January 10, 2018, SolApathy
(652) wrote:
What a wonderful piece, so sad, yet beautiful. It speaks volumes to many of those that have had that same hope that becomes a crushing force of despair. Keep writing!
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On Wednesday, January 10, 2018, Anunnaki
(18) wrote:
If you say so, will do just that, thanx SolApthy