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LIFE UPROOTED
By motherofnature
Hanging leaves from these branches soon i will have to shed you ..
As seasons change winter spring .. fall and who will catch you.
 Summer lives in your hue.
Rooted in your aura feeling immortal.
Yielding suns as I grew...
Hanging leaves from my branches askew .
I anew
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A former member wrote:
"Soon I will have to shed you", that really speaks to me. It's like that Game Of Thrones quote "kill the boy, let the man be born", sometimes we have to make drastic changes in order for us to move forward in life. It's not always easy, but it can all be worth it in the end. Very short, but still powerful. Reb:).
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On Saturday, February 18, 2017, MR feathered fox
(31)
wrote:
Beautiful poem about life, rebirth, & balance, Askew & anew Made me think of unbalanced And balanced This conveys yin & yang (leaving) a dying past For a new future life A break up poem and baby birth Fused in one brilliant write Way to use the left & right brain....
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On Saturday, February 18, 2017, motherofnature
(46) wrote:
Reading your perspective literally gave me chills.. words can be so compelling... askew binds so well with anew . Without antonyms synonyms would be moot.
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A former member wrote:
Great ending line. Touched well on the circle of the living. Thank you.
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On Saturday, February 18, 2017, motherofnature
(46) wrote:
Thanks for reading hun!
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On Friday, February 17, 2017, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Life goes on, and our circle of friends and loved ones do indeed shed as leaves. All we can do is hope for a mild winter and the promise of new buds in the spring. Life can be long - Cheers MoN! - Dan
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On Saturday, February 18, 2017, motherofnature
(46) wrote:
Eternal through lineage.
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