Soul in Turmoil
By felicity0444
The rough seas of my soul stir
as I wade through
this crazy miracle called life.
The words in my mind
that I can’t let out,
for fear of losing
what’s dear to me.
Would anyone understand
what really happens inside of me?
What goes through my head
when I see the selfishness that surrounds me?
Why don’t people see?
They think they see
….they are blind.
Selective sight
of what they want to see.
As the hurricane nears
I feel my waters begin to boil
and wonder what they will say
when my storm hits their land
and it’s their soul in turmoil.
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Copyright 2016 felicity0444
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On Friday, December 30, 2016, Queazenart
(200) wrote:
Ending three lines with "see" in such close proximity drives me crazy. The whole middle section of this piece seems under cooked and don't do that much for the narrative/metaphor of the poem. Sorry to be a critic :/