Alone

By felicity0444

Surrounded by people
I feel so alone
Everything to everyone
As everyone knows,
But no one is there to hold me
So I am all alone.
Only sad looks
And angry strides
Break the silence
In my home.
That's why I live in my mind.
I've got nowhere else to go.
The places that I go
In my mind no one should know.
For they are filled with smiles
And dreams of the unknown.
The sounds of life are deafening
So silence is where I go.
To the place where no one knows
It's not truly their home.

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Copyright 2016 felicity0444
Published on Thursday, August 25, 2016.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: An excellent piece.

  • Queazenart On Friday, August 26, 2016, Queazenart (212)By person wrote:

    The "alone forever" tag should have beend "forever alone" just for the irony XD. But for real, I liked this. The first half is premium sadness. It's very much in the vein of what I've been feeling and trying to write recently.

  • felicity0444 On Friday, August 26, 2016, felicity0444 (61)By person wrote:

    It's so hard to put that feeling to words. I totally know what you mean. Glad you liked it!

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