Alone
By felicity0444
Surrounded by people
I feel so alone
Everything to everyone
As everyone knows,
But no one is there to hold me
So I am all alone.
Only sad looks
And angry strides
Break the silence
In my home.
That's why I live in my mind.
I've got nowhere else to go.
The places that I go
In my mind no one should know.
For they are filled with smiles
And dreams of the unknown.
The sounds of life are deafening
So silence is where I go.
To the place where no one knows
It's not truly their home.
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Copyright 2016 felicity0444
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A former member wrote:
An excellent piece.
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On Friday, August 26, 2016, Queazenart
(200) wrote:
The "alone forever" tag should have beend "forever alone" just for the irony XD. But for real, I liked this. The first half is premium sadness. It's very much in the vein of what I've been feeling and trying to write recently.
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On Friday, August 26, 2016, felicity0444
(61) wrote:
It's so hard to put that feeling to words. I totally know what you mean. Glad you liked it!