Razor Blade Smile (Complete)

By SinisterSinner

The only way i will smile my dear...

Is if you cut me from ear to ear...

Lets find out what truly makes one tick...

Make me bleed until mellow horizons are all i see...

Watch the light flit from my eyes and remove this disguise...

Show me personally the Gods that you so highly praise...

Send me straight to Hades in my shining bloody armor...

Carry my feet swiftly to the halls of the great...

Slowly take your blade and gently let it slice every vain...

Cause the only way i will smile my dear...

Is if you cut me from ear to ear.

 

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Copyright 2016 SinisterSinner
Published on Thursday, August 25, 2016.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This is the final product of the short version i had come out with a few days ago.
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  • soul_versing On Saturday, August 27, 2016, soul_versing (1108)By person wrote:

    I found this rather appealing. A sadistic love story in reverse (I forward and rewind images while reading) don't mind me. Well done piece -Write on Scholar

  • felicity0444 On Friday, August 26, 2016, felicity0444 (64)By person wrote:

    I'm a very visual person, and this did a great job painting the picture for me. This feels like it could be at the beginning of a scary book about a serial killer...i love it.

  • SinisterSinner On Friday, August 26, 2016, SinisterSinner (44)By person wrote:

    I'm glad you loved it. I appreciate that very much!

  • SinisterSinner On Thursday, August 25, 2016, SinisterSinner (44)By person wrote:

    Thank you! Much appreciated.

  • Queazenart On Thursday, August 25, 2016, Queazenart (232)By person wrote:

    The glorification of being murdered by a loved one is pretty gnarly, man. It's fun to work with gnarly subjects. Keep it up.

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