its finally over
By Glass eyes
I find it peculiar how some people will say;
"No matter how long it takes ill wait for you"
or even;
"I cant move on because im in love with you"
and then the next thing you know your heart is being torn to peices.
I guess its funny how some things change,
its like you take a different path and then your life has turned a page.
I seen how much loving me was killing you,
But I was selfish and couldnt let you go.
Out of time and out of breath,
I watched as our love died and you left.
you didnt even try,
you just packed up and left while I cried.
How could you be so cruel?
Darkness begins to swallow me now,
im trying to escape but I don't know how.
you were my guardian and my shield,
the one that had my fate sealed.
Then one day you left for good,
and I just watched you as I stood.
feet planted firmly to the ground,
I wanted to go after you but my heart pound.
I know its time to let you go,
and ill just end it here I guess so.
please be happy and love the new girl your with.
because im gone forever on the other side of the cliff.
Comments on "its finally over "
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A former member wrote:
Looove this so sad can relate loved it....big giant hug.
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A former member wrote:
This was a lovely, yet sad poem. Very well written and intense ! Thank you for sharing your feelings.
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A former member wrote:
This made me so sad - bad memories. Very well written and full of emotion. xx
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On Thursday, June 9, 2016, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
Heav, tangible emotion throughout expressed well and without losing weight. A hard felt loss conveyed in the color of its weight. Well done