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Neon sex
By beamish
Neon visual sex sold to boys that know nothing more than to make noise
as she strolls by.
How much for that doggy in the window yells one.
Sorry ma'am, he is just having fun say another.
She doesn't mind as long as shes on their dime.
The problem being there is no respect for self or others.
Society has made a generation of disasters that see woman as toys for their
enjoy.
Woman walk on never taking a stand or laying her hand hard on the face
or man.
A sexed society that has desensitized the value of a body.
Man believe she is there for the taking.
She has been brain washed into believing her wealth is her body and not
her mind.
Let's start over in a world where neither sees thing so simple.
Where we are all judged by life and not by drunk boys who see woman as
nothing but sex toys.
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Copyright 2016 beamish
Published on Thursday, February 25, 2016.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Neon sex"
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A former member wrote:
I like your point of view and I couldn't agree more. Women are still looked upon as objects and nothing more. Well done!
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On Friday, February 26, 2016, beamish
(137)
wrote:
Thank you. Read my piece called painted face. You might enjoy
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On Thursday, February 25, 2016, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
"A sexed society that has desensitized the value of a body. Man believe she is there for the taking. She has been brain washed into believing her wealth is her body and not her mind" - that pretty well sums it up... Excellent piece! Ciao, T/S
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On Friday, February 26, 2016, beamish
(137) wrote:
Thank you it's a subject that need more attention
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A former member wrote:
The undertone of this writing is clear and candidly presented. When men have suggestive comments to say to a woman, it says nothing about the woman but says volumes about the man. I liked this work for its frankness and bold treatment of a challenging topic. Well done.
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On Thursday, February 25, 2016, beamish
(137) wrote:
Thank for being able to see my words as I meant them to be
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A former member wrote:
Are you from the red light district?
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On Thursday, February 25, 2016, beamish
(137) wrote:
It is meant to speak to the power woman should hold and not sell themselves short
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On Thursday, February 25, 2016, Noel Haiasi
(36) wrote:
This is a well written piece. My favorite line was, "She has been brainwashed into believing her wealth is her body and not her mind." Only thing I see are a few grammatical errors. Clean it up and you've got an awesome poem.
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On Thursday, February 25, 2016, beamish
(137) wrote:
Thanks I'll clean it up I appreciate your words
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