Transmission from the end of days
By Chameleon
Man
tinkered
with
science
and
the
particles
of
creation/
destruction,
like a sinister child;
until the last one witnessed
the majestic mushroom dawn.
It was then he finally realized:
One should not intrude
upon the playgrounds
of the gods.......................
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Copyright 2003 (High Priest OTD) Chameleon
Published on Friday, September 12, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, June 25, 2004, Anth
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well im convinced, i add you to my faves on but reading two of your works, i so love this,incredible
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On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, nell
(270) wrote:
cham you just touched a subject that i rcently discussed with my friends, how beautifull and yet terribly scary that cloud is.. if only they knew what they were doing
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On Saturday, September 13, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
and man usurped the place of the gods, and his wrath was perfect and total.
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On Friday, September 12, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Terrifying...mostly because this is how it will likely happen. Great write Chamo...great write indeed.
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On Friday, September 12, 2003, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
i dig it, concise and tasty dark.....
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On Friday, September 12, 2003, Chameleon
(111) wrote:
Damn it...the server displayed the last line wrong...fixing it right now.
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On Friday, September 12, 2003, Chameleon
(111) wrote:
there...it has been displayed properly.
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A former member wrote:
this is cool, but i don't understand the last line. i must be reading it wrong.