Transmission from the end of days

By Chameleon

Man

tinkered

with

science

and

the

particles

of

creation/

destruction,

like a sinister child;


until the last one witnessed
the majestic mushroom dawn.




It was then he finally realized:




One should not intrude
upon the playgrounds
of the gods.......................
..................................
.................[END TRANSMISSION]

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Copyright 2003 (High Priest OTD) Chameleon
Published on Friday, September 12, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Anth On Friday, June 25, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    well im convinced, i add you to my faves on but reading two of your works, i so love this,incredible

  • nell On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, nell (270)By person wrote:

    cham you just touched a subject that i rcently discussed with my friends, how beautifull and yet terribly scary that cloud is.. if only they knew what they were doing

  • manywalks On Saturday, September 13, 2003, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    and man usurped the place of the gods, and his wrath was perfect and total.

  • Six-Out On Friday, September 12, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Terrifying...mostly because this is how it will likely happen. Great write Chamo...great write indeed.

  • urbanhumility On Friday, September 12, 2003, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    i dig it, concise and tasty dark.....

  • Chameleon On Friday, September 12, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    Damn it...the server displayed the last line wrong...fixing it right now.

  • Chameleon On Friday, September 12, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    there...it has been displayed properly.

  • A former member wrote: this is cool, but i don't understand the last line. i must be reading it wrong.

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