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Guilty
By The Crimson Queen
.Abandoned.
from across the room
NOTHING changes
screaming emptiness inside
playing house
with a bro-ken family
looks pretty
from the windowsill
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On Tuesday, November 15, 2016, darkdesires
(139)
wrote:
I know the pain but you just have to remember sometimes broken is better than nothing. Glad to see you still can write heartfelt pieces.
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On Tuesday, March 8, 2016, Slingnasty
(137) wrote:
Wow last line very poignant! Great write. Ty
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On Sunday, September 6, 2015, Jesse Guzman
(39) wrote:
"Playing house with a bro-ken family". Great write!
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On Monday, August 17, 2015, haunted
(837) wrote:
I love this, its very haunting and the simple words in your last sentence just nailed it, it changed the perspective. so many ways to interpret this, but i'll keep mine because its fucking awesome! good job!
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A former member wrote:
I know this feeling all to well ... beautifully penned.
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On Monday, August 17, 2015, blue angel
(866) wrote:
The melancholy hangs heavily from that window sill. I like it a lot. The simplicity speaks in volumes. Nicely penned. - blue angel
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