Still missing you.

By Desi VS The World

I miss you like shooting stars miss the sky.
My heart continues to ache for you
in such a way that depression can't compare to how I feel.

Clutching the memories so close to me
in only a way that I can see

I'm suffocating by the fact that you're actually gone
and it's almost unbearable.

The realization that I will never get
a good-morning or good-night text
is sinking in
as I start to feel numb.
All the way to my core.

The chaos of my mind overcomes me
in the wee hours of the morning as the sun begins to rise
meanwhile I slowly slip into insanity.

My daydreams tend to conceive of what was
the reality of you (but you've vanished)

I can't believe you're gone
when I need you more than ever

(I'm still missing you)

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Copyright 2015 Desi VS The World
Published on Thursday, February 26, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This is so strong and so bittersweet. ..."Clutching the memories so close to me in only a way that I can see....I'm sorry for your pain, but you do express it quite beautifully. Keep your chin up. A really wonderful write.

  • A former member wrote: i to share the feelings that you express in this poem however it brings me some sort of warm feeling knowing that my grandfather is in a much more better place than the land I myself am walking on it must have taken courage for you to write this and post it and I value you for that hope you find peace and closure♡

  • A former member wrote: I've been here before, when that final realization of "never again" hits it's like being burried under one thousand pounds of rocks

  • veingo On Thursday, February 26, 2015, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    Dreams of lost loved ones have kept me up through the wee hours tonight. 5 times reading this over has reminded me of why I come here to DP at times like this. It has been just what I needed. Thank you for writing this, and welcome to the valley. ^V^

  • Damon Tarloth On Thursday, February 26, 2015, Damon Tarloth (142)By person wrote:

    Emotionally strong... :)

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