By Insatiable

You play me like a violin
my body against your skin
dragging your bow across my neck.

Your hands can play any note you want
you can make my frame tremble.

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Copyright 2014 Insatiable
Published on Sunday, August 20, 2023.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Star On Friday, July 25, 2014, Star (920)By person wrote:

    I could hear the music behind your words. It was salutary and sensual. Beautiful, my dear.

  • haunted On Friday, July 25, 2014, haunted (852)By person wrote:

    god, I wish I was a musician. lol.. this is really good jeana, short and sweet. awesome!

  • A former member wrote: Wow! What a sensuos piece! The metaphor with a violin is just perfect and very enticing.. My favorite part "your hands can play any note you want"!... Really sexy :) I enjoyed you writting a lot! Thank you for sharing :)

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