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Orchestra
By Insatiable
You play me like a violin
my body against your skin
dragging your bow across my neck.
Your hands can play any note you want
you can make my frame tremble.
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Copyright 2014 Insatiable
Published on Sunday, August 20, 2023.
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On Friday, July 25, 2014, Star
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wrote:
I could hear the music behind your words. It was salutary and sensual. Beautiful, my dear.
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On Friday, July 25, 2014, haunted
(849) wrote:
god, I wish I was a musician. lol.. this is really good jeana, short and sweet. awesome!
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A former member wrote:
Wow! What a sensuos piece! The metaphor with a violin is just perfect and very enticing.. My favorite part "your hands can play any note you want"!... Really sexy :) I enjoyed you writting a lot! Thank you for sharing :)
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