Follow The White Rabbit

By mikeygreenleaf

If I could prove that love exists
Romance hides behind my lips
Make you see you aren't alone
Bite your lip and not my own
Look in your eyes and not away
Close my ears to all hearsay
Quell the storm inside my head
Colorblind, but I see the red
Is that my blood pooling below?
Blade twisting ever slightly slow
Assurance that you were my friend
"Face value" seems to be the trend
Put your feelings up my arm
Skin tingly with metallic charm
Inside the vein ritual complete
Chasing rabbits through its streets
Queen of hearts chases for naught
This hare will never settle caught

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Copyright 2014 mikeygreenleaf
Published on Sunday, July 13, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: 'Metallic charm', I know that one, aptly said, nicely pen'd.

  • mikeygreenleaf On Monday, January 26, 2015, mikeygreenleaf (89)By person wrote:

    Thank you! :)

  • A former member wrote: Thoughtful and great flow. Love. :)

  • mikeygreenleaf On Saturday, January 3, 2015, mikeygreenleaf (89)By person wrote:

    Thank you :) glad you like! !

  • A former member wrote: Well done.

  • mikeygreenleaf On Wednesday, October 1, 2014, mikeygreenleaf (89)By person wrote:

    thank you!! :)

  • soul_versing On Thursday, September 11, 2014, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    Such a clever hare. ... watch out for the mad hatter. ...And much enjoyment for the imagination. Scholar

  • Lux On Tuesday, July 15, 2014, Lux (280)By person wrote:

    Let Alice sit with her fancy tea cups. The real Wonderland holds missives of the dark. A politely rhymed poem, that had an unforgiving tone. Enjoyed.

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Sunday, July 13, 2014, Intoxicating Delirium (273)By person wrote:

    This has the perfect rhythm to it and I love the ending. Great write!

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