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Pavements
By raspberry89
lonely doesn't express this hollow feeling
lonely can't define why death is appealing
lost my bearing, now i'm stuck again
I've been lost since i don't know when
seems that I took the wrong path
but everyone knows you can't change the past
thought I followed the right directions
but this road is long with no intersections
so now i'm trying to find my way
probably be wonderin til judgement day
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Copyright 2014 raspberry89
Published on Wednesday, July 2, 2014.
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A former member wrote:
Outstanding rhyme, truly. This leaves me hungrily wanting more, loneliness can be a soul crushing venture. Excellent write.
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2014, haunted
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wrote:
don't feel bad im on this same road, let me be your guide because I know where im going. but if your unhappy you can keep moving forward and that road will eventually be in the past like your path. very good poem, made me think of my own choices and why im on a road that may never get me anywhere. awesome!
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2014, raspberry89
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good point, thanks :)) it's nice to have someone relate...
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