Black Sun Utopia

By Dark Unicorn

An enchanting sigh of satin blackness she heaves
As the death cold cuffs of her metallic sleeves
Stamp beads of scarlet hatred onto her ethereal aura
Unleashing the dreaded beast within the box of Pandora.

Majestic yet tortured is this soul-devouring unicorn
But still her bludgeoned heart sees past its deadly alicorn
And she gently swallows the choking strands of crescent moonlight
That seep from its mystical bane of evil in the serenity of night.

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Copyright 2014 Dark Unicorn
Published on Sunday, April 20, 2014.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

One of my shortest poems to date.I fear my writing has turned to complete and utter garbage.#sigh
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  • poe_lover28 On Tuesday, June 24, 2014, poe_lover28 (163)By person wrote:

    I was stunned by thr beautiful weave of words you created this poem from, really great flow!

  • A former member wrote: Ahh... What a wonderful reading I've experienced! Thank you for sharing..:)

  • Dark Unicorn On Sunday, June 15, 2014, Dark Unicorn (49)By person wrote:

    Thank you.I appreciate the lovely comment.

  • Bashost On Thursday, June 12, 2014, Bashost (23)By person wrote:

    Wow. The title pulled me in, and the poem did not disappoint. I love the lyrical feel to this, and I sung it in my head. Beautiful poem.

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