Dark Haiku

By GoldenBlack

As I sit and gaze
A warm night with blackened skies
The wind whispers death

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Copyright 2014 GoldenBlack
Published on Monday, March 24, 2014.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

my spin on a haiku.
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  • GoldenBlack On Tuesday, March 25, 2014, GoldenBlack (3)By person wrote:

    Thank you for your comments. I have been gone for a while but I am drawn back to wanting to share my thoughts.

  • megaprime81 On Tuesday, March 25, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Great work. 10

  • A former member wrote: Agree with above comment^^ haunting is the right word. Keep writing!

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful and haunting. I picture this in open fields, whereas I have felt this in December snow.

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