Phoenix's Flame

By SinisterSkittles

If I could fly into the sun
Watch them as they run
For only I can see myself
A shattered mirror; a broken dream.

If I could fly into the sky
Maybe I will feel alive
Don't try to tell me it's not real
Now tell me

I will fly
Watch me burn away
All of yesterday

....If I could fly into the light
Would you save me tonight?

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Copyright 2014 SinisterSkittles
Published on Monday, March 17, 2014.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Very nice poem of the Phoenix enjoyed it

  • SinisterSkittles On Wednesday, May 7, 2014, SinisterSkittles (41)By person wrote:

    That's good^.^ Glad you liked it

  • A former member wrote: I wonder if a fresh start that wipes away everything is such a good thing or not. Would you not then cease to be? You would have to lose all memory of what has happened and all experience. In essence, you would no longer be you. Pain has a way of leaving strength and character behind.

  • SinisterSkittles On Wednesday, May 7, 2014, SinisterSkittles (41)By person wrote:

    That's very true, I like the way you think lol

  • River Lily On Thursday, March 20, 2014, River Lily (1021)By person wrote:

    Rebirth is possible without flying away into the sun.."every moment we breathe, we have the chance to change" Its a choice we make..if you are unhappy seek what makes you happy..we cant rely on others to do it for us.. Scholar

  • SinisterSkittles On Wednesday, May 7, 2014, SinisterSkittles (41)By person wrote:

    thanks for the advice, and i know others can't do it for me, but so far nothing really makes me truly happy so kinda a problem there lol

  • soul_versing On Monday, March 17, 2014, soul_versing (964)By person wrote:

    Sometimes it takes you needing to move on and let go of the past to gain insight. Nice delivery on fighting your inner demon. And believe me it's never easy. Well done, love. .hugs. Scholar

  • SinisterSkittles On Tuesday, March 18, 2014, SinisterSkittles (41)By person wrote:

    Thank you, hopefully it'll just blow on by like the other times, but I'm glad people like you are there to help

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