12 Hours, 10 Doors

By inhisbelly

"May I take your vitals please?" 
"Are you feeling short of breath?"
"Which finger may I poke?"

Another 2nd shift hospital night 
Turnaround of circadian rhythms and
10 creaky doors.

12 hours of
Wading through somnolent swamps
Of aching, shaking hands;
Waiting juice boxes and packages of saltines,
While dodging familiar stenches of excrement that
Lodge themselves in every vacant nostril.

Here is a place called home for none
But the most curious fusions 
Of ennui and vigor;
Like every ride on public transit
Or fresh flowers in stale water.

Here the only observable constants
Are the reticent pleas of the people
To the vessels that carry them to
Just behave, goddamnit
(or god will it)
And I’m reminded of resignnent 
To the agony of unrequited love.

I weep like it’s my heartbreak
When I receive the thank-you cards,
Silently protesting the distribution of  gratitude
Because surely, re-acquainting me with
Humanity and humility nightly
Deserves more thanks 
Than steering cold, metal walkers
Through old, sterile hallways.

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Copyright 2014 inhisbelly
Published on Monday, January 20, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Not a fresh piece, but I thought I would share it in order to provide a little background information about myself.
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  • A former member wrote: You've done it again, Bev! Everything those precious fingers touch turn to gold, or silver, or to cite the genius writer's penchant for the elements here, "transuranium." Love the deep, sterile depths you bring to this work, someone managing to weave bitterness and flatline resignation into a work that evokes images that flash only in gray and white. You do wonderful, enchanting works that are unrealistically unattainable for even the most seasoned poets. Surely you've been sprinkled with fairy dust, Bev, for it can't be your blood, sweat, and tears that create such ethereal beauty every single time. You're really a special, enviable, and sincerely devoted author in every single form. Reading you is like sailing a rocking ship down calm waters . . . completely disconcerting and undeniably intriguing.

  • Numbers Peppelini On Tuesday, January 21, 2014, Numbers Peppelini (74)By person wrote:

    Title compelling, the poet never lets me down. Yet again, words drop to the canvas with pristine bits of truth that hold our disconnected thoughts in contempt..... It is said that if one speaks to God he is deemed religious. Though if God speaks back to him he is psychotic.....Much in the same way 12 hours and 10 doors later.... earning a living this way..... mimics the hellish sound of institution, that conflict in the fading footsteps to some silent protest for the distribution of gratitude.....Yet there are those we have anointed as saints who've done it merely out of compassion.

  • carlosjackal On Monday, January 20, 2014, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    A revealing piece, rich in detail..The sadness and confusion is palpable. Sheer brilliance.

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