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One Fine Day
By raspberry89
I don’t live like I used to
I don’t know me like I once knew
All I know are words that tenderly condescend
What was real to me, to you was pretend
I'd love to forgive and forget
But In the back of my mind I still feel the neglect
It has now manifested into loneliness
And I fear in my heart only this
Happiness in life is no guarantee
I am not who I used to be
One day I’ll try to look back and smile
But I’m certain that day won’t come round for awhile
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Copyright 2013 raspberry89
Published on Friday, October 11, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "One Fine Day"
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A former member wrote:
I sense a knowing and optimistic smile in there somewhere. This had a nice calming peace about it that I really liked. Excellent work.
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On Wednesday, October 16, 2013, Peyton1
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wrote:
I am right there with ya, I felt every line! As I read through your penned thoughts, I gazed into my own reflection. Yes, maybe one day......but no time soon. Nicely written rb89...
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On Wednesday, October 16, 2013, Fallenfromgrace
(103) wrote:
How many of us have lost ourselves inside ourselves...? The pain of that is almost unbearable but there will come a day that you will be able to look back and smile at all the shit you've been thru. Great write. :)
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