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through the looking glass
By silverwolf
patience is a virtue of mine, it's true
but I lose it all when it comes to you
you know precisely what to do and say
to make my shell just drop away
your complaints cut straight through
regarding everything wrong that I do
criticizing and not seeing my view
as to what exactly I have to go through
my depression keeps me locked away
your remarks only make me want to stay
as you don't hold back on what you say
I'm a time bomb, ticking right away
all that you want to correct in me
is exactly what I learned to be
from the one who raised a child alone
with only your approval to condone
I have portrayed the mirror I was
and have reflected everything I must
I should not be berated for your view
I have reflected everything from you
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Copyright 2003 silverwolf
Published on Wednesday, August 20, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "through the looking glass"
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A former member wrote:
powerful.... awesome write!
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On Monday, September 15, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047)
wrote:
You have expressed the feelings of many here. I'm honored to have read this.
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On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, silverwolf
(20) wrote:
thank you deeply! this was a very hard poem that has been trying to get me to write for years now.
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
I think we've all been there at one point or another. I'm looking forward to reading more of yours...you have something in you that I like...er...I mean you write good.
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A former member wrote:
I like this alot. I feel this one rather often. Well spoken. err...written rather? Lol. Good write. ^aura^
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A former member wrote:
oooo, very good write. i like how in the end it shows that your problems that are being agitated are only reflections of the agitator. well done. :)
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