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Gray Sadness
By Dreamscape
A splash of warm rain
In a city of angels and demons
A familiar smell of the metro
That reminds me of my childhood years
Eyes filled with pain
They belong to a beautiful woman
That familiar smell of gray sadness
That her glance whispered into my ears
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Copyright 2013 Dreamscape
Published on Wednesday, August 21, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Gray Sadness"
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On Thursday, October 10, 2013, FadedBlues
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wrote:
...attractive atmosphere in this. the beginning of a noir romance...
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A former member wrote:
elegaic and profoundly beautiful.
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On Wednesday, August 21, 2013, dwells
(4284) wrote:
The city takes on the persona of another over the span of a lifetime, or maybe just seen through older eyes? Cheers!
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A former member wrote:
In such a short piece you really have painted a remarkably vivid picture, I really enjoyed this, has a forlorn feel to it that fits the mood and the rain perfectly.
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