Gray Sadness

By Dreamscape

A splash of warm rain
In a city of angels and demons
A familiar smell of the metro
That reminds me of my childhood years
Eyes filled with pain
They belong to a beautiful woman
That familiar smell of gray sadness
That her glance whispered into my ears

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Copyright 2013 Dreamscape
Published on Wednesday, August 21, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • FadedBlues On Thursday, October 10, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...attractive atmosphere in this. the beginning of a noir romance...

  • A former member wrote: elegaic and profoundly beautiful.

  • dwells On Wednesday, August 21, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    The city takes on the persona of another over the span of a lifetime, or maybe just seen through older eyes? Cheers!

  • A former member wrote: In such a short piece you really have painted a remarkably vivid picture, I really enjoyed this, has a forlorn feel to it that fits the mood and the rain perfectly.

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