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Death vs Love
By eternal despair
Shadows of fear betray me,
as I walk the path of death.
While I walk further,
I see the face of love.
In the oppisite direction,
I see my sanctuary awaiting me.
I stand in the middle,
wallowing in pain.
The decision is to be made,
I am deeply confused.
Too distant from thought,
to answer my fate.
With tears in my eyes,
I think of love and death.
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Copyright 2003 eternal despair
Published on Thursday, August 14, 2003.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Death vs Love"
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On Friday, February 4, 2005, happilydepressed
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wrote:
awesome write, i love it
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On Monday, January 5, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
choices...hard to choose what you want and need, well done
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A former member wrote:
Wow wow wow, Chérie, you're getting better and better with time... Can't wait for your next one... *Lilith*
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
very deep words, cut throught me like a steak knife throw butter. *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, SnowQueen
(59) wrote:
The end is hard hitting. I liked it. Quite the decision to be made... keep up the good work.
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A former member wrote:
"wallowing in pain" is very significant. why wallow? get moving again!
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