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poetic sanctuary
By eternal despair
dead inside
i lust for the reaper
my soul cries out to death
alone tonight
i dream of a freedom
my heart yearns to let go
insanely inlove
i'm hanging on for him
my love is eternally his
suicidal thoughts
i cant stop them
my blood urges to be spilt
heart broken
i hate this pain
my dark mind manifests a poet
poetic sanctuary
i rest my thoughts in verse
my love for him keeps me alive
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Copyright 2003 eternal despair
Published on Monday, August 11, 2003.
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518)
wrote:
So simple it would seem, Yet no simple is the doubt, Love stain doubt, Doubt stain love. So simple it would seem. Tiger
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A former member wrote:
Aww this is great. So sad, yet so beautiful... Very nice job... *Lilith*
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A former member wrote:
Oh and the title is just perfect :) *Lilith*
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A former member wrote:
I really like the beat of the second line in the 1st and 2nd stanzas, would have liked to see that beat and loose rhyme through the poem. :)
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On Wednesday, August 13, 2003, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
well done, this feeling of despair lays upon my heart.......well said........urban
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On Tuesday, August 12, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
this is a good love poem, original. I like it.. Monkey
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