Image
By Diva_Satanica
I see her sitting there across the room,
were both sitting on similar chairs.
I'm in awe of here beauty, stlyle and smile
her long straight black hair,
two inches above her tail bone.
her posture is so purfect like
she has had a million pictures taken.
I see those pouty lips almost always in black.
how her cheeks lift when her true smile shows.
I see those hazel eyes peering at me,
as if to know what i'm thinking.
the many designs and ways to use black eyeliner.
God shes beautiful...
I cant take this any longer,
i have to get a better view of this..wonder.
as I stand she does the same.
her style is enticing to say the least.
every ansemble is well chosen,
for the appropraite time, mood or event.
with a smile on my face and a deep breath
i nervously walk toward her.
though she stands there waiting.
we are face to face now,just inches apart.
we both part our lips to say somthing.
I have huge smile on my face
this mirror is awesome,
it defines me well !!
Comments on "Image"
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A former member wrote:
Diva Satanica, reflection on the wall,
your face the fairest of them all.
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A former member wrote:
Bizzare and wondeful. paints your body perfectly...
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On Thursday, August 21, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
I like this one! It's sexy
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On Monday, August 11, 2003, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
sheer confidence, that's what I got most from this. I could never describe myself in such beautiful poetry, but you've done it wonderfully...very nice
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On Sunday, August 10, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Ah, I really like this. The ending threw me off, but made the poem that much better. Good job.
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On Sunday, August 10, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
I tis good to love yourself..confidence is the mightiest turn on one can possess..Good piece here...~Velvet~
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On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
nice i'vee read one kinda like this xomewhere, great job none the less
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A former member wrote:
"as I stand she does the same" gave it away. Maybe because I have written a similar piece (not posted here). Enjoyable though the mystery was complete for me until that line.