DIE

By devilsrighthand

 Pure hatred fills my eyes.

Your mouth just spewing lies

Flowing out like swarms of flies

Screaming out like endless cries

Pure Hatred Fills My Eyes.

I hope that Everybody. Just. DIES.

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Copyright 2013 devilsrighthand
Published on Tuesday, February 19, 2013.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Damon Tarloth On Wednesday, May 21, 2014, Damon Tarloth (142)By person wrote:

    I like it, especially the last line :)

  • A former member wrote: I can relate to this like all time, because I feel exactly like that a lot. The lies, the hate, I can definitely relate. I liked it, keep up the good work.

  • A former member wrote: I'm just going to grab a pillow, nice and carefully……and start punching the shit out of it! This poem is epic, I'm envious of you because I can't write short and sweet for my life lol. This is the exact feeling I get when I think everyone has their own agenda about me and I love the symbolism at the start; spewing of lies and flowing out like swarms of flies = pure genius! Keep writing!

  • BetaWolfinVA On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (791)By person wrote:

    wow... i take it that you are just slightly peeved? Scholar

  • BlackVelvet Rose On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose (175)By person wrote:

    Oh, i know where you are coming from here. I feel this way at least once a day. thank you... Scholar

  • Rowan On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, Rowan (197)By person wrote:

    I know exactly how you feel. Sometimes I just hate everyone. I can understand those days. I try not to let people get to me but I get tired of all the lying, cheating, backstabbing, and corruption. I think we all get tired of it every now and then. I like short but powerful poems like this. They're always a pleasure to read.

  • Fallenfromgrace On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, Fallenfromgrace (103)By person wrote:

    holy shit... You wrote how I felt about an hour ago. Thanks!!! short and sweet. :)

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