DIE
By devilsrighthand
Pure hatred fills my eyes.
Your mouth just spewing
lies
Flowing out like swarms of flies
Screaming out
like endless cries
Pure Hatred Fills My Eyes.
I hope
that Everybody. Just. DIES.
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Copyright 2013 devilsrighthand
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On Wednesday, May 21, 2014, Damon Tarloth
(142) wrote:
I like it, especially the last line :)
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A former member wrote:
I can relate to this like all time, because I feel exactly like that a lot. The lies, the hate, I can definitely relate. I liked it, keep up the good work.
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A former member wrote:
I'm just going to grab a pillow, nice and carefully……and start punching the shit out of it! This poem is epic, I'm envious of you because I can't write short and sweet for my life lol. This is the exact feeling I get when I think everyone has their own agenda about me and I love the symbolism at the start; spewing of lies and flowing out like swarms of flies = pure genius! Keep writing!
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On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
wow... i take it that you are just slightly peeved?
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On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
Oh, i know where you are coming from here. I feel this way at least once a day. thank you...
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On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, Rowan
(197) wrote:
I know exactly how you feel. Sometimes I just hate everyone. I can understand those days. I try not to let people get to me but I get tired of all the lying, cheating, backstabbing, and corruption. I think we all get tired of it every now and then. I like short but powerful poems like this. They're always a pleasure to read.
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On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, Fallenfromgrace
(103) wrote:
holy shit... You wrote how I felt about an hour ago. Thanks!!! short and sweet. :)