Chaos

By Abbyernathie

In the realm of Chaos,
My mind has gone astray.
Strangers locked me up inside
And threw the key away.

In the realm of Broken Hearts,
Is where I find myself.
Strangers stole my love away
And stuck it on a shelf.

In the realm of Shattered Dreams,
I have lost all hope.
Strangers are what chased me here
And I’m searching for the rope.

Turns out the strangers weren’t so bad,
In fact they were my friends.
They were trying to turn my life around
So it wouldn’t come to this terrible end.

I thought that there was no way out,
So I attempted suicide.
If it wasn’t for the strangers,
I wouldn’t be alive.

Please know that you are not alone,
And that there’s always hope.
There’s always someone to turn to;
Someone to help you cope.

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Copyright 2003 Abbyernathie
Published on Thursday, August 7, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • mywristshurt On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    Thats a good poem to somewhat slap someone in the head and say "hey man, its not worth it" and i like that.. it shows that you've been there and done that.. i liked this write

  • aNaRcHyPoEt On Friday, August 8, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt (24)By person wrote:

    positive message. great write. keep posting your work, its beautiful.

  • A Velvet Tongue On Friday, August 8, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    Nice flow and positive message...nice to see you haven't tossed us another suicide poem..lol...Keep em coming! ~Velvet~

  • The Fallen Angel On Friday, August 8, 2003, The Fallen Angel (234)By person wrote:

    I Love It!...sometimes i feel like no one can help my adversity. But I always remember that real friends will pull me up and they need my help and are waiting for me to breathe again.

  • Rebel_Angel On Friday, August 8, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I like this a lot! This is why people have friends so they can help them out!...And so u can help them out...Great Write!

  • Aurora_Light On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    a great write. we all have or need someone, and this is a great write about it

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