Black Rain

By Abbyernathie

I hide all my pain and sorrow.
You see no expression on my face
With the exception of a forged happiness.
If only you could see though all the lies.

I sit at home and look at my life.
I feel as if there is a storm raging in my heart.
It’s black clouds rumbling overhead,
Drenching my soul in black rain.

I try to forget all of the anger,
But it never seems to go away.
It remains somewhere in the back of my mind,
Continually growing until it prevails over my sanity.

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Copyright 2003 Abbyernathie
Published on Thursday, August 7, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • finaldestiny On Tuesday, August 12, 2003, finaldestiny (72)By person wrote:

    nice i like this one very nice detail! my props!

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, August 8, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    thanks anarchypoet

  • aNaRcHyPoEt On Friday, August 8, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt (24)By person wrote:

    sofar, this si the best one of your works i ahve read. Great job. ~ap

  • Rebel_Angel On Friday, August 8, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    Poems like this make me wonder Ms. Abby!...lol...Nice Write Keep It Up!

  • Aurora_Light On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    nice as i've told u before.

  • Liz On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Liz (265)By person wrote:

    A storm raging in my heart... Yes, this one is much better.

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