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Corruption
By Diva_Satanica
As I whither slowly
Into the darkness
The petals fall
Faster then usual
My mind is corrupted
And my body,
My soul
They are all dark
like dried rose petals
That have been scattered
over a fresh grave.
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Copyright 2003 Diva_Satanica
Published on Thursday, August 7, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Corruption"
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On Thursday, October 14, 2004, Chaos-Slayer-
(7)
wrote:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!
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A former member wrote:
again your darkness is awesome, i love this write!
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A former member wrote:
COOL!
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On Friday, October 17, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
not bad, not bad at all.. sad to see your not a member no more..
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A former member wrote:
I can not say anything because your work as taken my breath away...
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On Sunday, August 10, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
What hue are the petals?...the hue of a rose tends to tell so much...
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A former member wrote:
Why is it that good short pieces seem to say so much more than you would expect? Lovely dark imagery here, a picture is worth a thousand words, but these thirty eight are worth a thousand pictures.
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A former member wrote:
Nice poem, I liked it~whort_diddy
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
Very Nice Poem
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt
(24) wrote:
beautiful poem. Great description and emotion. ~ap
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
rose petals dried or fresh are beautiful just like this write u have made.
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
Intriguing critique of the bondage of lust and abomination.
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