Blade and Gun

By EMOheart

The body of one
once filled with life
lays dead on the ground
a bullet inside


Beneath his, the body
of his beautiful Miss
lips licked with hers
in a passionate kiss


Only moments before
she had fled from her life
with a cut to her throat
from the blade of her knife


Unwilling to go on
when he found her dead
he shot the bullet
through his head


Both now are dead
the deed is done
together forever
at hand of blade and gun

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Copyright 2012 LUNA
Published on Wednesday, December 5, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Markus Darkscribe On Monday, December 31, 2012, Markus Darkscribe (60)By person wrote:

    Can't go on without love passionate write

  • PoetessDarkly On Wednesday, December 19, 2012, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    awesome poem death is almost palatable. :)

  • A former member wrote: "a bullet inside". somehow this line absolutely stuck to me in its simplicity and effect...had me hooked. nice work!

  • Devilish On Wednesday, December 5, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    You have a gift darling. It's far from a beginer. Hello there and much love. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Wow! Those rhymes are simply amazing!!! Goooood work!!! :D Scholar

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