The Loudest Noise In The World

By archangelmichael

 Waves crashing against the shoreline

in early morning hours
Lying in bed on a hot summer night
windows up, the crickets singing outside
But the loudest noise in the world is so much more intense than those
It's the sound of your own heart
breaking

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Copyright 2012 archangelmichael
Published on Sunday, December 8, 2013.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Sunday, November 5, 2023, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    A deep, palpable, visual and emotional write. Hits to the core.

  • A former member wrote: the loudest noise, and yet the saddest noise too. I am hearing that now...... :( beautiful poem

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful. simply beautiful. heartfelt and yet short. (:

  • A former member wrote: this is deep and heartfelt.. so simple yet beautifully written.

  • A former member wrote: Sad but lovely. Thanks

  • A former member wrote: Wow... Beautifully deep, amidst it's short outward appearance... Love this write, hope you stay, and continue to write. Ever need a friend message me.

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