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Eternity
By finaldestiny
I stare endlessly into your eyes,
catching every wink.
They convey messages,
that no words could express.
Words cannot bear any meaning,
for shackles will tie them down.
Silence can say more,
than words will say in eternity.
I will wait eternity,
for my words to meet your actions.
When that has elasped,
We shall come alive.
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Copyright 2003 finaldestiny
Published on Tuesday, July 22, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, August 16, 2003, maddin foxxxy
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wrote:
I found the ending as a beautiful awakening...very well done
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A former member wrote:
not bad. i enjoy your work! i think you should cheak out my work. i think you will find it to be satisfying
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A former member wrote:
this is really cool... i really enjoyed it, i wish i had that talent... **sighs, and sits in corner to pout**
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On Friday, July 25, 2003, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
amazing.... this is a wonderful little piece you have here. bravo!
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A former member wrote:
i like this one..its really like touching you could say..ne ways keep it up, KeLLy-LyNN
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