He would never desert me .
By Corinthian
Safe.
under
his
great shadow
like
a golden
box in
my eyes
men
dreamers
lead me
by the mind
I am
his+
priceless
and quiet
so little
mingled
so
unlit
wishes
dreams
&
lips
slipping
sipping
dipped
in
violet
spit
one
distant
ceiling
white
bells
part
&
my
body
shakes
beneath
his
heartbeat
+
enmeshed
in dirty
blossom
iridescent
dirt
.
painted
in pain
trembling
and
mild
tasting
my
wound
every
night
he brings
to
me
rare
white
flowers
with
sparkling
vine
Jars
of glints
blue
burned
and
incensed
his
distant
bell
caught
in my ear
one
holy
soul
chiming
I
caught
his gold.
I do not
want
to talk
to you
+you do not
count now
where
ever
he
leads
me
I
will follow
I bear thoughts which will
make both your ears tingle
Qué pocos días son necesarios para que pase
un siglo.
Comments on "He would never desert me ."
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A former member wrote:
"Priceless and quiet so little mingled so unlit" that sounds so innocent . I really like the part "I don't want to talk to you ..real beautiful Corinthian yes he is a lucky man indeed.
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A former member wrote:
We all find that one guy ..... and then he leaves, that's my case. I hope yours is different
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A former member wrote:
I would hope that "he" knows this.
All is not dark 'Doba...one could paint the Sistine with your tears alone..
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On Saturday, March 10, 2012, With love_Crow
(82) wrote:
Beautiful work with lovely descriptions.
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On Saturday, March 10, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
..'my body shakes beneath his heartbeat': tremendous way to say 'Orgasm'...(visible, very visible).